On page 136 of 240 with edits/rewriting
Clichés deleted: 9
Adverbs (-ly) deleted: 13
Thought/though typos: 11
Not as bad as I originally thought it would be but then again, I haven't been through the entire thing. Tonight I'll be sending it off to my writing partners with typos, tension problems and too many one-word sentences. Sad but has to be done. In the meantime, check out the link below. It'll be well worth your time.
I think it's time for another FREE EDIT contest, don't you?
Just like last time, I'm giving away a FREE substantial edit! (That's plot, pacing, character development, etc, up to 100k words) to one lucky reader!
With that I leave you, the editing is calling. Have a good one and wish me luck.