Saturday, August 13, 2011

Flight Lines

Latest lines from my YA Fantasy, Flight.  My MC Bronwynne is in a lot of trouble and it's only about to get worse.  Spoiler alert.  If you ever intend on reading this or critiquing it, this will give away a lot.  Just staying.

-I’d made it this far only to be seen by one of Rhys’s new recruits.  I should have known things wouldn’t keep going in my favor.  If you count a tumble down stairs, a dislocated and sprained shoulder, multiple bruises and a homicidal monarch wanting you dead in your favor.  Not to mention being groped by a scientist, that stint in the pitch black dungeon and losing the one guy that actually could have made you happy.  Things were just peachy.-

 Happy Saturday all.

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