I've been collecting these links for a while now.
Fiction Critiques: How To - That's what Liz said
Synop-what? - Kathleen Ortiz
Finding the Heart of Your Story: A Tip from Donald Maass - Adventures in Children's Publishing
Flat Adverbs Are Flat-Out Useful by Mark Nichol - Daily Writing Tips
10 Websites and Blogs of Punctuation Protectors by Mark Nichol - Daily Writing Tips
Tensed Up by Danyelle L - QueryTracker.net
Guest Author Dana Marton: 7 Tips to Improve Your Novel’s Pacing - The Other Side of the Story
The Ultimate 15 point Checklist to Make Your Writing Come Alive by Marya Zainab - Write to Done
Seven Character Types That Build Your Story - Adventures in Children's Publishing
Moving Quickly Through a Draft - Mystery Writing is Murder Elizabeth Spann Craig
The 25-word hook revisited - Help! I Need a Publisher I'm definitely coming back to this one.